tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568898004027801588.post84163884765158325..comments2018-08-28T07:37:49.285-07:00Comments on Caroline @ Saint Pius X Catholic School: The missing bag - WritingSPX Blog Admin 2http://www.blogger.com/profile/16528806958580752607noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568898004027801588.post-27233793225124498102016-11-01T18:24:49.726-07:002016-11-01T18:24:49.726-07:00Hi Caroline,
I really like how your story had lots...Hi Caroline,<br />I really like how your story had lots of detail. I could connect with your story because I once went on a trip and almost lost my bag. I think you could work on your punctuation when writing your narrative story. <br />Otherwise Good Job and Keep it Up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568898004027801588.post-58636069046734211672016-11-01T18:17:06.762-07:002016-11-01T18:17:06.762-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568898004027801588.post-18880836471422884782016-10-24T23:11:01.936-07:002016-10-24T23:11:01.936-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568898004027801588.post-30264708391527901302016-10-24T20:24:35.934-07:002016-10-24T20:24:35.934-07:00Thanks Aaliyah!!😁Thanks Aaliyah!!😁Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568898004027801588.post-63259282994383542182016-10-24T20:24:01.201-07:002016-10-24T20:24:01.201-07:00Thanks Saveu!!! 😁😄Thanks Saveu!!! 😁😄Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568898004027801588.post-88591145681383170752016-10-17T18:02:23.202-07:002016-10-17T18:02:23.202-07:00Hey Caroline, I liked that you used interesting de...Hey Caroline, I liked that you used interesting describing words to give your readers an image of what you are trying to tell us. <br />Great Job!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568898004027801588.post-21526356518216466022016-10-13T16:43:20.939-07:002016-10-13T16:43:20.939-07:00Hi Caroline,
I really liked your writing it was ...Hi Caroline, <br /><br />I really liked your writing it was different from the others. I liked how you used punctuation. Do you like to listen to music ? I do.<br />Keep it up ! 😁😄 Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com