I am a Year 8 student at St. Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in the SPX Nu'u Learning Space and my teacher is Mrs Tui.
Hi Caroline, I think your writing is very detailed which isn’t a problem but if you could use a little more bit of adjectives it would probably make your piece of writing more interesting for your audience or readers. From Mikaela.T
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Hi Caroline, I think your writing is very detailed which isn’t a problem but if you could use a little more bit of adjectives it would probably make your piece of writing more interesting for your audience or readers.
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