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Thursday 7 September 2017

πŸ’!Why animals should be in the Zoo!πŸ’


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Greatly Appreciated!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Laine xo
    I love your writing on why we should keep animals in the zoo. Next time I think you should proof read your work and use commas instead of fullstops.

    Keep up the good work xo

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